Thursday, July 31, 2008

perspectives:two

She was watching him; peering past the playground, pretending to watch the toddler and its hovering mother. He didn’t know who had sat down first, but as soon as the last tears had fallen he had gotten the unnerving feelings of eyes pointed in his direction.

Raising his head slightly, he peered past his greasy hair and through red, puffy eyes. He sniffled. The point had come where if he had a cool million dollars, he would go out and buy a box of Kleenex, the kind with twenty extra tissues. His head dropped back down, and he stared at the cement sidewalk, and watched the sun dry his tears.

Most people loved the spring, loved the fresh green everything and the life that burst through the pale grey bed sheet of winter.

He hated it.

It wasn’t even the ski slopes closing down for another year, or the transformation of pure, beautiful snow into a sickly, watery sludge, or even the overhanging shadow of spring-cleaning. It was his allergies.

His hatred for spring was directly connected to his teary, runny-nosed, head-throbbing, barely-breathing existence that started every single year, as soon as the snow melted and the appropriate wildlife had once again begun to thrive. Allergies as bad as his caught more glances than he would like, but that’s just how it was.

The girl across the playground wore, on the face that refused to admit it was watching, a look that he didn’t often receive from girls his own age. Most of the time it was a sort of disgust, or pity. This time, however, it appeared to be something entirely different.

9 comments:

-evan said...

that's it. that's all i had planned for this big 'interconnected' story. two posts. that's it.

this post was written while listening to:

1234 - feist

May-Belle said...

regardless of waht you planned.
i formally request more (cowbell).
but seriously...what hapens. do they talk? do they fall in love? become best friends and THEN fall in love? does his face haunt her forever as a 'what if'? does he pursue her.

tell me what happens.

and ps. you are my hero.

Anonymous said...

hey i really like your stuff!!!

Anonymous said...

i agree with hannah.
i {a little more informally}
request MORE.

do they talk?
do they hate eachother?
does he love her, kill her, worry about her, despise her, take care of her....?
how does it end?

-evan said...

"does he kill her?"

wow. how morbid are we. i think that i have respect enough for my readers not to turn potentially-romantic scenarios into full-blown horror ones.

but we'll see about "more."

*rolls eyes*

Anonymous said...

i hate spring,

i hate flowers and light greens and pastels and bumble bees and baby animals,
yuck.

May-Belle said...

*raises eyebrow*

i thought i was the cynical one.

but...megan wins...

wow...

Anonymous said...

that was nice...lame word, I know, but it fits. It was cute and just simply enjoyable.

Tabitha said...

Hey Evan, I've really enjoyed reading your blog. I love how you turned the story around--her thinking he's all depressed about a breakup when it's actually allergies. Great stuff.