Tuesday, September 16, 2008

one night.

It was a cold, dark night, typical of most in late October. The slight change that this night held was the monster under the bed, waiting.

Steven lay underneath the covers, body so rigid that the small of his back didn’t touch the mattress. The little matchstick boy stared at the ceiling, but really waited for something to appear in his peripheral. He pushed his head further back into the pillow, watching both sides of the bed.

While his eyes pretended to watch the ceiling, his ears strained to hear the slightest slither, the scrape of dry, inhuman skin on the floorboards. He barely breathed to keep it as silent as possible, but his heartbeat raced out of control and echoed in his ears like war drums.

Ten years old. At ten years old you knew better than to lose sleep over whatever figments your imagination was coming up with in the late hours of the night. But he knew there was something there.

In the corner of his room, leaning against the wall, was his hockey stick. He thanked God that he chose a hockey stick over a new bike last Christmas, and cursed himself for not asking for a baseball bat. It would be difficult to use a hockey stick- it would be unwieldy, and hard to swing.

That being thought, he knew what he had to do. The full realization of his next, and very likely last, action caused his eyes to open wide, and he sucked in a deep breath.

Something large and scaly dragged itself past the boxes underneath the bed.

It seemed like hours before he released that breath. When he did, it was slowly, so that he felt like a slowly deflating balloon.

The monster had gone towards the left side of the bed.

This was his chance. The hockey stick was on the other side of the room, in the right corner. It leaned against the wall with all the might of Excalibur, promising salvation, or at the very least the feel of something hard and heavy.

He closed his eyes, and hoped this wouldn’t be the last time.

Steven threw the covers back over the left side of the bed, and knew in his head that they had landed on something. The sound of tearing cloth reached his ears as soon as his feet touched the ground, and he very promptly wet himself. He ran so fast that his forehead collided with the darkened wall, but his fingers wrapped themselves tightly around the handle.

Now he could fight back.

The creature had slid back underneath the bed, and turning around he felt its hot, putrid breath pour over his feet, even though the bed was at least four feet away. Two bright, yellow eyes reflected the streetlights outside, and they looked right into his.

He raised his hands over his head, grit his teeth, and brought the stick down hard on the floorboards. They struck with a resounding CRACK. His hands were numb, and they hurt, but he knew what he had to do.

Steven screamed at the top of his lungs and brought it down again, harder, feeling the wooden shaft almost shatter. The jaundiced eyes widened, and a heavy breath washed over his feet and ankles, causing them to start sweating.

The rest of his body was ice, and he shook like a leaf. He knew that although his scream had echoed throughout the entire house, no one was coming. He was all alone.

He levelled his arms and brought the hockey stick out, straight in front of him like a lance. In his mind he knew that only one of them would be left alive once it was all over.

This would be his one night stand.

10 comments:

-evan said...

written listening to:

careful what you wish for - raine maida

one evening - feist

it's been awhile since i last wrote anything even vaguely belonging to the horror genre. it's a good feeling.

thearchitects said...

I LOVE IT.
he sort of reminds me of vincent.
{do you remember those short stories we wrote WAY back in eleventh grade?}

"matchstick boy"

i have a picture in mind.
do you think i could draw it?
i hope you will let me.

-evan said...

please do.

May-Belle said...

after checking my bed.
and assuring that my bears and my books will protect em.
evan.
you. scared. me.
and then the last line
i laughed out loud. the irony.
the delicious bitter irony.
it just..ah.
thank you for reminding me why i love reading.

Anonymous said...

Not my genre but i def. picked up on your passion for writing, which is great. Good for you!

Secondly, his name should be Eves! Eves is a great name, way better than Steven. lol.

And, "It seemed like hours before he got he released that breath. When he did, it was slowly, so that he felt like a slowly deflating balloon" <---this needs revising.

-evan said...

ack, you're right! i am so ashamed i want to delete your comment so it's like it never happened. andra. anonymous. andronymous.

Unknown said...

i like it. alot. especially the last sentence. it amused me.

Cable said...

oops...i meant calvin AND hobbes...
still good tho

Anonymous said...

im pretty sure we all to some degree saw a frame or two of calvin in this,
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i like the matchstick bit,
but not the ending so much.. i dontknow why, i didnt want it to end that way.
i think i wanted him to run away, which doesnt make sense.

how do you decide what you write about, i mean does the whole thing just kind of creep its way into your head as a daydream, or do you think "i feel like writing something scary. maybe i will make it about a monster. and a ten year old boy." -and gradually piece it together?

-evan said...

um. hm. well, i thought about horror. it was what i wanted to write about.

and i remember staying up at night, in the middle of the bed, just praying that the monsters wouldn't murder me in my sleep. it's pretty terrifying.

yes, i know there is definitely some calvin and hobbes in there. but- really, not much.

the music helped. "one evening," because, well, yeah.. and "careful what you wish for," because it has a generally horror-ish feel about the intro.